Chris: I think you should write a comic book dictionary for sound effects/onomatopoeias. “Shunk,” “Kung,” & “Ker-esh” – nice. Andrew used one of my favorite words in this episode: “Cripes!” Kudos. You write some of the best cliffhangers I’ve ever read. Jerk.
Kyle: Your illustrations keep outdoing themselves! Even though they are inconsequential to the story line, I really like your birds on page 2. My favorite pages are 9 and 10. Fist through robot head: awesome.
Sarah: Beautiful monotone palette for the memory flashbacks. The grayish/purple hue of the smoke emanating from the damaged robots looks great.
good episode!! love the ending with “the evil ones” making plans
Yes! Some action! I love the panel on page 7 where SMASH is running on the wall away from the bullets. Keep it up guys.
Hoorah!! Excellent work.
Chris: I think you should write a comic book dictionary for sound effects/onomatopoeias. “Shunk,” “Kung,” & “Ker-esh” – nice. Andrew used one of my favorite words in this episode: “Cripes!” Kudos. You write some of the best cliffhangers I’ve ever read. Jerk.
Kyle: Your illustrations keep outdoing themselves! Even though they are inconsequential to the story line, I really like your birds on page 2. My favorite pages are 9 and 10. Fist through robot head: awesome.
Sarah: Beautiful monotone palette for the memory flashbacks. The grayish/purple hue of the smoke emanating from the damaged robots looks great.
*cough*Smashhoodie*cough*
Nice. Another good one! Smash better be careful…he’s getting into to some heavy stuff!